Story Battle 9 – Frankie’s Summer Date vs. Beatrice Bee Meets Lil’ Rebel

Story Battle 9

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Battle 9 is Frankie’s Summer Date with 70  points.
  STORY 1

Frankie’s Summer Date

 

Frankie

STORY 2

Beatrice Bee Meets Lil’ Rebel

Beatrice Bee

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Description of character – 1 pt each no description of the characters 0 no description of the characters 0
2. Is there a conflict in this story – 10 pts Frankie wanted to do something nice for Anna but he didn’t know what 10 Lil’ Rebel wanted to torture Beatrice Bee 10
3. Does main character have needs? – 10 pts  Frankie’s need is to make Anna happy 10 Beatrice’s need is to keep Lil’ Rebel from torturing her 10
4. Does the story take place in the present? – 10 pts Yes, this story takes place in the present 10 Yes, this story takes place in the present 10
5. “ST” words – 1 pt for each no “ST” words 0 started 1
6. Description of scenery – 1 pt each no description of scenery 0 drawing a tree she saw in the background 1
7. Mention of a building – 10 pts diner, movie theatre 20 no mention of a dwelling 0
8. Mention of the word “summer” – 5 pts for each no mention of the word “summer” 0 hot summer day 5
9. Did the story take place in a city – 10 pts Yes, Cabbagetown, Toronto, Ontario 10 no 0
10. Happy ending – 10 pts  Frankie was very happy at the end and so was Anna 10 Beatrice was very happy that Lil’ Rebel didn’t torture her 10
TOTAL SCORE: 70 47

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