Story Battle 7 – Billy Troll’s New Bee Song vs. End of Summer Picnic
Story Battle 7
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Billy Troll’s New Bee Song
- Story 2 – End of Summer Picnic
The winner of Battle 7 is End of Summer Picnic with 70 points.
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Happy words – 1 pt each | excitedly, laughed, love, enjoy, sweet | 5 | exclaimed, enjoyed | 2 |
| 2. Sad Words – 1 pt each | cried | 1 | disappointed | 1 |
| 3. For each question asked – 10 pts for each | You have heard of me?, So, Beatrice, what do you think of my new album? | 20 | How about a picnic?, When are we going?, What about our swim?, Who wants ice-cream? | 40 |
| 4. Does any character have long hair – 10 pts each | Billy Troll | 10 | Poor Mountain Sister | 10 |
| 5. “CH” words – 1 pt for each | no “CH” words | 0 | children | 1 |
| 6. Happy beginning – 10 pts | not a happy beginning because by opening the window, Billy let Beatrice in | 0 | not a happy beginning because Poor Mountain Mother was concerned that summer was almost over already | 0 |
| 7. Happy ending – 10 pts | yes, Billy wrote a song for Beatrice | 10 | yes, Poor Mountain Father took his family for ice cream | 10 |
| 8. Mention of word “summer” – 1 pt for each | very hot summer day | 1 | summer is almost over, end of summer picnic x 4, perfect summer day | 6 |
| 9. Mention of a vehicle – 10 pts | no mention of a vehicle | 0 | no mention of a vehicle | 0 |
| 10. Mention of a blue sky – 10 pts | no mention of a blue sky | 0 | no mention of a blue sky | 0 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 47 | 70 | ||
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