Story Battle 5 – Campfire Stories vs. Monster in Yellow

Story Battle 5 

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Battle 5 is Campfire Stories  with 49 points.
  STORY 1

Campfire Stories

Fawn

STORY 2

Monster in Yellow

Yellow Monster

 

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Positive Beginning – 10 pts  were quite relaxed 10 bright yellow paint, that is so much worse 0
2. Happy Ending – 10 pts  Please, we love your stories 10 became the best of friends 10
3. Mention of outdoors – 5 pts sitting by the campfire 5 walking down the street 5
4. Mention of numbers – 1 pt each one hot July evening, were millions, 10 years old, another one, one time, 5 years old 6 one that was just painted, one ugly colour 2
5. Mention of a location – 5 pts. campsite   5  street
6. Description of character – 1 pt for each hair on the back of both Fawn and Spot’s neck stood straight up, mouths wide open   very disfigured face
7. If more than two characters – 10 pts  Fawn, Spot, Mr. Hansen, Mrs. Hansen 10  Jessica, Maggie, Simon 10
8. Mention of vegetation- 1 pt for each bushes 1 hedges, weeds, grass 3
9. Mention of a building – 10 pts  no building 0 old Johnston’s home 10 
10. Mention of vegetables – 1 pt for each  no vegetables 0 no vegetables 0
TOTAL SCORE:    49    46

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