Story Battle 5 – Campfire Stories vs. Monster in Yellow
Story Battle 5
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Campfire Stories
- Story 2 – Monster in Yellow
The winner of Battle 5 is Campfire Stories with 49 points.
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Positive Beginning – 10 pts | were quite relaxed | 10 | bright yellow paint, that is so much worse | 0 |
| 2. Happy Ending – 10 pts | Please, we love your stories | 10 | became the best of friends | 10 |
| 3. Mention of outdoors – 5 pts | sitting by the campfire | 5 | walking down the street | 5 |
| 4. Mention of numbers – 1 pt each | one hot July evening, were millions, 10 years old, another one, one time, 5 years old | 6 | one that was just painted, one ugly colour | 2 |
| 5. Mention of a location – 5 pts. | campsite | 5 | street | 5 |
| 6. Description of character – 1 pt for each | hair on the back of both Fawn and Spot’s neck stood straight up, mouths wide open | 2 | very disfigured face | 1 |
| 7. If more than two characters – 10 pts | Fawn, Spot, Mr. Hansen, Mrs. Hansen | 10 | Jessica, Maggie, Simon | 10 |
| 8. Mention of vegetation- 1 pt for each | bushes | 1 | hedges, weeds, grass | 3 |
| 9. Mention of a building – 10 pts | no building | 0 | old Johnston’s home | 10 |
| 10. Mention of vegetables – 1 pt for each | no vegetables | 0 | no vegetables | 0 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 49 | 46 | ||
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