Story Battle 46 – Old Jack vs. Monsters and More Monsters

Story Battle 46

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 46 is Monsters and More Monsters with 750 points.

Old Jack

Pumpkin Patch


Monsters and More Monsters


(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “wa” walking, wanted (x2), was (x13), way (x3), want, waste, wasn’t (x3) 240 was (x13), want (x2), way, waiting, watching (x2), walked (x3), wave, washed, walk, wait 270
2. Words that end with “gh” 0 0
3. Descriptive words in the 6th paragraph huge (describes pumpkin), old (describes Jack) 20 terrified (describes look) 10
4. Words that have “re” in them there (x4), great, remember, sure, more, here, care, were, are 120 street (x5), care, where, scared (x3), whispered, appeared (x2), different, are (x5), were (x4), green, aren’t (x2), relief, here, remember, reading, pretty(x2), there (x2), stared, red, scare 370
5. Words that contain double “pp” happy (x4), approved 50 appeared (x2), supposed 30
6. Characters names in the 4th paragraph Bumpkins (x2) 20 Pete (x2) 20
7. Words that rhyme with “bar” are 10 are (x5) 50
8. Compound words in the 9th and 10th paragraph 0 0
9. The word “great” great 10 0
10. Words that contain vowels “ue” 0 0
  TOTAL SCORE: 470 750

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