Story Battle 45 – Old Jack vs. Silly Snake’s First Halloween

Story Battle 45

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 45 is Old Jack with 340 points.

Old Jack

Pumpkin Patch


Silly Snake’s First Halloween

Silly Snake 


(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “te” tenderly, teethy, tears 30 tell 10
2. Words that end with “ft” 0 left 10
3. Descriptive words in the 5th paragraph happy (describes faces), pumpkin (describes patch) 20 silly (describes snake) 10
4. Words that have “pa” in them patch (x3), part 40 pathway (x2), parents (x2) 40
5. Words that contain double “oo” poor, too (x2), doorstep (x3), soon (x2), sooner 90 cool, footsteps, too, took 40
6. Characters names in the 3rd paragraph Bumpkins 10 Silly Snake 10
7. Words that rhyme with “let” set 10 yet, get (x6) 70
8. Compound words in the 7th and 8th paragraph outside, doorstep 20 pathway, something 20
9. The word “had” had (x11) 110 had (x2) 20
10. Words that contain vowels “oa” road 10 approached 10
  TOTAL SCORE: 340 240

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