Story Battle 43 – Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch vs. Old Jack

Story Battle 43

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 43 is Old Jack with 150 points.

Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch

Autumn Elf



Old Jack

Pumpkin Patch


(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “pr” 0 0
2. Words that end with “te” white 10 waste, celebrate, quite 30
3. Descriptive words in the 3rd paragraph pumpkin (describes patch) 10 old (describes log cabin), log (describes cabin), lonely (describes old fellow), old (describes fellow), old black cat (describes Bumpkins), old (describes Bumpkins), black (describes Bumpkins), cat (describes Bumpkins) 80
4. Words that have “na” in them name 10 0
5. Words that contain double “mm” immensely 10 0
6. Characters names in the 10th paragraph Autumn Elf, Stella 20 0
7. Words that rhyme with “jam” am (x5) 50 0
8. Compound words in the 2nd and 4th paragraph 0 doorstep (x2) 20
9. The word “great” great (x2) 20 great 10
10. Words that contain vowels “ei” 0 seeing 10
  TOTAL SCORE: 130 150

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