Story Battle 42 – Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch vs. Bad Teeth Bradley

Story Battle 42

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 42 is Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch with 340 points.

Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch

Autumn Elf



Bad Teeth Bradley

Bad Teeth Bradley


(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “op” 0 opened (x2), opening 30
2. Words that end with “se” because (x2), close (x2) 40 close, purchase, please, because 40
3. Descriptive words in the 2nd paragraph autumn (describes elf), huge (describes pumpkin patch), pumpkin (describes patch) (x2) 40 brand new (describes candy store), candy (describes store), bad teeth (describes Bradley) 30
4. Words that have “kn” in them 0 knowing 10
5. Words that contain double “gg” suggested, zig-zagging (x2), hugging 40 0
6. Characters names in the 9th paragraph Autumn Elf 10 Dr. Stevens, Bad Teeth Bradley 20
7. Words that rhyme with “in” pumpkin (X12) 120 0
8. Compound words in the 1st and 3rd paragraph 0 0
9. The word “better” better 10 0
10. Words that contain vowels “io” section (x5), sections (x2), direction 80 delicious 10
  TOTAL SCORE: 340 140

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