Story Battle 41 – Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch vs. Angry Baker’s Autumn Treat

Story Battle 41

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 41 is Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch with 360 points.

Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch

Autumn Elf



Angry Baker’s Autumn Treat

The Angry Baker

(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “no” north, no, not (x3), now (x2), noticed 80 0
2. Words that end with “rt” smart  10 0
3. Descriptive words in the 1st paragraph autumn (describes elf), adventurous (describes elf), little (describes elf) 30 beautiful (describes day), autumn (describes day), angry (describes baker), new (describes treat), baked (describes treat) 50
4. Words that have “im” in them himself (x4), him (x5), time, exclaimed, immensely 120 exclaimed (x2), himself  30
5. Words that contain double “ff” off (x2), difficult 30 0
6. Characters names in the 8th paragraph Autumn Elf (x2), Stella 30 Angry Baker 10
7. Words that rhyme with “hot” dot (x2), not (x3) 50 got 10
8. Compound words in the 9th and 10th paragraph 0 0
9. The word “amazing” 0 0
10. Words that contain vowels “eo” people 10 0
  TOTAL SCORE: 360 100

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