Story Battle 40 – Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch vs. Autumn Elf Makes Autumn a Happy Time

Story Battle 40

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 40 is Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch with 730 points.

Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch

Autumn Elf



Autumn Elf Makes Autumn a Happy Time

Autumn Elf


(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “ma” main, maybe, may (x2), mark, make 60 making (x2), made (x2) 40
2. Words that end with “st” lost (x7), first, just (x6), almost 150 almost 10
3. Descriptive words in the 10th paragraph autumn (describes elf) 10 autumn (describes elf) 10
4. Words that have “ho” in them without, who, thought, how (x2), somehow, showing, hour, shoulder, shoo, show, shoe, home 130 how (x2), thought, who, showed (x2), whole 70
5. Words that contain double “dd” 0 0
6. Characters names in the 7th paragraph Stella 10 Stella 10
7. Words that rhyme with “get” pocket (x2) 20 let 10
8. Compound words in the 7th and 8th paragraph 0 0
9. The word “yes” yes 10 yes 10
10. Words that contain vowels “ai” said (x29), explained, paid, main, again, exclaimed 340 said (x11), explained 120
  TOTAL SCORE: 730 280

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