Story Battle 4 – Beatrice Bee at the Cottage vs. Dancing Lights

Story Battle 4 

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Battle 4 is Dancing Lights  with 173 points.
  STORY 1

Beatrice Bee at the Cottage

Beatrice Bee

STORY 2

Dancing Lights

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Old story or new story – old – 10 pts new – 5 pts written August 26, 2017 5 written January 22, 1995 10
2. Mention of animals- 1 pt for each bee 1 no mention of animals 0
3. 5 pts for every 100 words of the story  word count 252 10 word count 708 35
4. “W” words – 1 pt for each window, what, woman, while, would, wash, was, when 8 we, well, were, whenever, would, was, waking, will, wonderful, winding, when, wait, where, went, wow, what, welcoming 17
5. Mention of a park – 5 pts. no mention of a park 0 no mention of a park 0
6. Female characters – 10 pts for each Beatrice Bee, Grandma 20 Mary (Mom), Grandma 20
7. Male characters – 10 pts for each Grandpa 10 Johnny, Danny (Daddy), Grandpa 30
8. Elderly characters – 20 pts for each Grandma, Grandpa 40 Grandma, Grandpa 40
9. Young characters – 20 pts for each no young characters 0 Johnny 20
10. Mention of desserts – 1 pt for each chocolate cake 1 tray full of goodies 1
TOTAL SCORE:   95    173

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