Story Battle 4 – Beatrice Bee at the Cottage vs. Dancing Lights
Story Battle 4
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Beatrice Bee at the Cottage
- Story 2 – Dancing Lights
The winner of Battle 4 is Dancing Lights with 173 points.
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Old story or new story – old – 10 pts new – 5 pts | written August 26, 2017 | 5 | written January 22, 1995 | 10 |
| 2. Mention of animals- 1 pt for each | bee | 1 | no mention of animals | 0 |
| 3. 5 pts for every 100 words of the story | word count 252 | 10 | word count 708 | 35 |
| 4. “W” words – 1 pt for each | window, what, woman, while, would, wash, was, when | 8 | we, well, were, whenever, would, was, waking, will, wonderful, winding, when, wait, where, went, wow, what, welcoming | 17 |
| 5. Mention of a park – 5 pts. | no mention of a park | 0 | no mention of a park | 0 |
| 6. Female characters – 10 pts for each | Beatrice Bee, Grandma | 20 | Mary (Mom), Grandma | 20 |
| 7. Male characters – 10 pts for each | Grandpa | 10 | Johnny, Danny (Daddy), Grandpa | 30 |
| 8. Elderly characters – 20 pts for each | Grandma, Grandpa | 40 | Grandma, Grandpa | 40 |
| 9. Young characters – 20 pts for each | no young characters | 0 | Johnny | 20 |
| 10. Mention of desserts – 1 pt for each | chocolate cake | 1 | tray full of goodies | 1 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 95 | 173 | ||
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