Story Battle 39 – Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch vs. Trickster’s Autumn Tricks

Story Battle 39

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 39 is Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch with 610 points.

Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch

Autumn Elf




Trickster’s Autumn Tricks



(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “le” leaving, let’s (x2), left (x2) 50 leaves (x12), let’s 130
2. Words that end with “re” there (x3), acre (x2), were (x6), more, are (x9), here (x6), where 280 were (x3), scare, are 50
3. Descriptive words in the 9th paragraph large ones (describes pumpkins) (x2), extra large (describes section), autumn (describes elf) 40 huge pile (describes leaves) 10
4. Words that have “gr” in them grateful (x2), angry, ground, great, group 60 grabbed 10
5. Words that contain double “cc” 0 0
6. Characters names in the 6th paragraph Autumn Elf, Stella 20 Fred, Trickster 20
7. Words that rhyme with “fat” that (x10), at (x5) 150 that (x5), at (x2) 70
8. Compound words in the 5th and 6th paragraph without 0
9. The word “want” 0 want 10
10. Words that contain vowels “ue” continued 10 0
  TOTAL SCORE: 610 300

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