Story Battle 38 – Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch vs. Pumpkin Fairy

Story Battle 38

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 38 is Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch with 220 points.

Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch

Autumn Elf




Pumpkin Fairy

Pumpkin Fairy


(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “in” in (x6), introduced (x3), instead 100 innocent, in (x3), inside (x2) 60
2. Words that end with “pt” kept 10 0
3. Descriptive words in the 7th paragraph 0 farmer (describes John) 10
4. Words that have “fr” in them from, front, friends (x2) 40 confronted, from 20
5. Words that contain double “tt” little (x2), admittance, getting, better 50 pretty, Patterson, sitting (x2), little (x2), better, matter 80
6. Characters names in the 4th paragraph Autumn Elf, Stella 20 Pumpkin Fairy 10
7. Words that rhyme with “ear” 0 dear 10
8. Compound words in the 3rd and 4th paragraph 0 whoever 10
9. The word “used” 0 0
10. Words that contain vowels “oa” 0 0
  TOTAL SCORE: 220 200

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