Story Battle 37 – Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch vs. Pumpkins and Ghosts

Story Battle 37

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 37 is Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch with 470 points.

Autumn Elf in the Pumpkin Patch

Autumn Elf





Pumpkins and Ghosts

spooky ghost



(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “ho” how (x2), hour, home 40 home (x2) 20
2. Words that end with “ow” now (x2), row (x2), how (x2), somehow, scarecrow (x3), crow (x6), show, follow 180 now (x2), know, window, scarecrow 50
3. Descriptive words in the 6th paragraph very (describes big pumpkin patch), big (describes pumpkin patch), pumpkin (describes patch), admittance (describes fee) 40 0
4. Words that have “ex” in them extra (x4), explained, next, exclaimed 70 next (x2) 20
5. Words that contain double “ss” 0 0
6. Characters names in the 3rd paragraph Stella 10 one of the voices 10
7. Words that rhyme with “did” slid 10 0
8. Compound words in the 2nd and 3rd paragraph 0 0
9. The word “take” take (x2) 20 0
10. Words that contain vowels “ie” twentieth, piece, worried, cried, tie, friends (x2) 70 field (x3), believe (x5) 80
  TOTAL SCORE: 440 180

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