Story Battle 30 – Apple Monster is Thankful for Apples vs. The Meaning of Thanksgiving

Story Battle 30

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The purpose of Story Battles is to have fun with my stories. They are a good way to open up communication about them. I do hope you enjoy Story Battles and please feel free to have your own story battles with any of the stories on the Storyland website.

It is recommended to read both stories that are involved in each story battle. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 30 is Apple Monster is Thankful for Apples with 500 points.
   STORY 1

Apple Monster is Thankful for Apples Apple Monster


The Meaning of Thanksgiving



(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Words that start with “ne” needed, next, never 30 next, neighbours 20
2. Words that end with “te” bite 10 celebrate, fortunate 20
3. Descriptive words in the 6th paragraph 0 0
4. Words that have “lo” in them allowed, close, allow 30 lot, fellow 20
5. Words that contain double “ll” allowed, fallen, call, really, will (x2), all (x2), allow 90 hallway, smell, will, doorbell (x3), well, all, fellow 90
6. Characters names in the 7th paragraph Mrs. Queen, Apple Monster (x2) 30 0
7. Words that rhyme with “gray” day (x2), okay, away, yesterday 50 hallway, okay 20
8. Compound words in the 7th and 8th paragraph Thanksgiving, however, upset 30 doorbell (x2) 20
9. The word “should” 0 0
10. Words that contain vowels “ou” your (x3), you (x14), ground (x2), would (x3), could 230 couple, hours, you (x6), brought, about (x2), our, could, would, your, neighbours 160
  TOTAL SCORE: 500 350

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