Story Battle 3 – Beatrice Bee Runs Into Travelin’ Rick vs. In the Summer
Story Battle 3
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Beatrice Bee Runs Into Travelin’ Rick
- Story 2 – In the Summer
The winner of Battle 3 is Beatrice Bee Runs Into Travelin’ Rick with 44 points.
| STORY 1
Beatrice Bee Runs Into Travelin’ Rick
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Is this a true story? – 10 pts. | no this is not a true story | 0 | no this is not a true story | 0 |
| 2. Mention of a dwelling – 5 pts. | coming out of a motel room | 5 | mention of rooms in the house but not the actual house | 0 |
| 3. Mention of a monster – 5 pts. | no mention of a monster | 0 | no mention of a monster | 0 |
| 4. Does it have a good moral to it? – 10 pts. | Traveling is an adventure | 10 | It is nice to get outside in the warm weather | 10 |
| 5. Mention of a city – 5 pts. | Calgary | 5 | no mention of a city | 0 |
| 6. Names mentioned – 1 pt for each name | Beatrice Bee, Travelin’ Rick | 2 | Poor Mountain Brother, Poor Mountain Father, Poor Mountain Sister | 3 |
| 7. Plants or trees mentioned – 1 pt for each | no mention of plants or trees | 0 | no mention of plants or trees | 0 |
| 8. Mention of an action word – 1 pt for each | flying, carrying, coming, flew, land, landed, visiting, traveling, read, opening, heading, visit, come, going, driving, waving | 16 | came, come, play, playing, walked, saw, sitting, on my way, going, got up, went, play catch | 12 |
| 9. Is it a nice day? – 5 pts. | yes, a hot summer day | 5 | at first no but then it turned warm | 5 |
| 10. Mention of an insect – 1 pt for each | Beatrice Bee | 1 | no mention of an insect | 0 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 44 | 30 | ||
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