Story Battle 3 – Beatrice Bee Runs Into Travelin’ Rick vs. In the Summer

Story Battle 3 

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Battle 3 is Beatrice Bee Runs Into Travelin’ Rick with 44 points.
  STORY 1

Beatrice Bee Runs Into Travelin’ Rick

Beatrice Bee

STORY 2

In the Summer

Poor Mountain Family

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Is this a true story? – 10 pts. no this is not a true story 0 no this is not a true story 0
2. Mention of a dwelling – 5 pts. coming out of a motel room 5 mention of rooms in the house but not the actual house 0
3. Mention of a monster – 5 pts. no mention of a monster 0 no mention of a monster 0
4. Does it have a good moral to it? – 10 pts. Traveling is an adventure 10 It is nice to get outside in the warm weather 10
5. Mention of a city – 5 pts. Calgary 5 no mention of a city 0
6. Names mentioned – 1 pt for each name Beatrice Bee, Travelin’ Rick 2 Poor Mountain Brother, Poor Mountain Father, Poor Mountain Sister 3
7. Plants or trees mentioned – 1 pt for each no mention of plants or trees 0 no mention of plants or trees 0
8. Mention of an action word – 1 pt for each flying, carrying, coming, flew, land, landed, visiting, traveling, read, opening, heading, visit, come, going, driving, waving 16 came, come, play, playing, walked, saw, sitting, on my way, going, got up, went, play catch 12
9. Is it a nice day? – 5 pts.  yes, a hot summer day 5 at first no but then it turned warm 5
10. Mention of an insect – 1 pt for each Beatrice Bee 1 no mention of an insect 0
TOTAL SCORE:   44   30

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