Story Battle 22 – Autumn Elf Roasts Marshmallows vs. Desert Kid’s Acorn Roast

Story Battle 22

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 22 is Autumn Elf Roasts Marshmallows with 790 points.
   STORY 1

Autumn Elf Roasts Marshmallows

Autumn Elf



Desert Kid’s Acorn Roast

Desert Kid

(10 pts for each item found)
   Points    Points
1. Five letter words that starts with “s”  — 0  start 10
2. Six letter words that end with “g” taking, raking 20 eating 10
3.  Words containing a colour  red 10  — 0
4.  Words that end with “ked”  walked, asked (x2), overlooked 40  asked 10
5. Words containing a number  one (x4), three 50  two 10 
6. Characters names  Autumn Elf (x23), Stella (x18), Andrea (x2), Frankton (x14) 570  Desert Kid (x9), Mother (x5), Father (x9) 230
7. Words that rhyme with “hold”  —  0
8. Action words starting with “tr” 0 0
9. The word “like”  like (x6) 60 0
10. Locations  woods, home, outside, house,   40  edge, Okanagan Valley, British Columbia, desert (x4), desert area, home, shed, surrounding area  110
  TOTAL SCORE:   790    380 

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