Story Battle 21 – Applesauce vs. The Lonely Pumpkin
Story Battle 21
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Applesauce
- Story 2 – The Lonely Pumpkin
The winner of Story Battle 21 is Applesauce with 115 points.
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Mention of fruits? – 10 pts each | yes – apples | 10 | no mention of fruits | 0 |
| 2. Did I do the drawing? – 10 pts for yes | yes – I drew this apple | 10 | no – this is a photograph | 0 |
| 3. Is the story based on a real life event? – 20 pts. if yes | yes – many years ago I made applesauce and sold it | 20 | no – this story is fiction | 0 |
| 4. Does story begin with dialogue? – 20 pts, if yes | yes – “Oh, it is such a beautiful morning!” exclaimed Ma. | 20 | no – this story did not begin with dialogue | 0 |
| 5. Words that start with “at” – 10 pts each | at x4 | 40 | at x3 | 30 |
| 6. Are there any humans in this story? – 10 pts | yes – Ma and Pa | 10 | yes – The Poor Mountain Family and owner of pumpkin stand | 10 |
| 7. Mention of the word “garden” – 10 pts each | no mention of a garden | 0 | no mention of a garden | 0 |
| 8. Is a storm mentioned? – 10 pts | no mention of a storm | 0 | no mention of a storm | 0 |
| 9. Mention of the word “smell” – 5 pts each | no mention of the word “smell” | 0 | no mention of the word “smell” | 0 |
| 10. Words that end with “est” – 5 pts each | rest | 5 | tiniest | 5 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 115 | 45 | ||
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