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Story Battle 2 – Cold Days of Summer vs. Camping Adventure

Fawn and Spot Stories Story Battles Travelin' Rick Stories

Story Battle 2 

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Battle 2 is Camping Adventure with 25 points.
  STORY 1

Cold Days of Summer

Fawn

STORY 2

Camping Adventure

Travelin' Rick

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Mention of Animals – 1 pt for each 2 cows – Fawn and Spot 2 seeing fish jump, a few loons, golden eagle, bald eagle, crows 5
2. Mention of Smell – 1 pt for each no smell 0 no smell 0
3. Mention of Season – 5 pt middle of summer 5 no mention of season 0
4. Is the story funny? – 10 pts more serious 0 more of an adventure 0
5. Does story take place at a lake? – 10 pts  no at a barn 0 The lake that I was at  10
6. Does the story end well? – 10 pts  no, the weather turned very hot 0  no, crows were chasing the eagle 0
7. Is character happy? – 5 pts  not really because Fawn complained of the weather 0  most certainly a thrill 5
8. Does character get into trouble? – 5 pts  no 0 no 0
9. Is there a storm? – 1 pt  it rained 5 no 0
10. Does the character cook? – 5 pts  no 0 cooked some hot dogs   5
TOTAL SCORE:   12   25

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