Story Battle 2 – Cold Days of Summer vs. Camping Adventure
Story Battle 2
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Cold Days of Summer
- Story 2 – Camping Adventure
The winner of Battle 2 is Camping Adventure with 25 points.
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Mention of Animals – 1 pt for each | 2 cows – Fawn and Spot | 2 | seeing fish jump, a few loons, golden eagle, bald eagle, crows | 5 |
| 2. Mention of Smell – 1 pt for each | no smell | 0 | no smell | 0 |
| 3. Mention of Season – 5 pt | middle of summer | 5 | no mention of season | 0 |
| 4. Is the story funny? – 10 pts | more serious | 0 | more of an adventure | 0 |
| 5. Does story take place at a lake? – 10 pts | no at a barn | 0 | The lake that I was at | 10 |
| 6. Does the story end well? – 10 pts | no, the weather turned very hot | 0 | no, crows were chasing the eagle | 0 |
| 7. Is character happy? – 5 pts | not really because Fawn complained of the weather | 0 | most certainly a thrill | 5 |
| 8. Does character get into trouble? – 5 pts | no | 0 | no | 0 |
| 9. Is there a storm? – 1 pt | it rained | 5 | no | 0 |
| 10. Does the character cook? – 5 pts | no | 0 | cooked some hot dogs | 5 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 12 | 25 | ||
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