Story Battle 18 – Baby Face Monster’s Windy Day vs. Travelin’ Rick Goes to the Fall Fair

Story Battle 18

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 18 is Baby Face Monster’s Windy Day with 75 points.
  STORY 1

Baby Face Monster’s Windy Day

Baby Face Monster

 

 

STORY 2

Travelin’ Rick Goes to the Fall Fair

Travelin' Rick

 

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Which story do I like best? – 10 pts I don’t like this story as much. 0 I do like this story better because it is fun to go to the fall fair. 10
2. Which character drawing do I like best? – 10 pts  I do like this character the best. I like his curl. 10 I don’t like this drawing as much. 0
3. Could story end any better? – 10 pts. if yes No, this one ended good with Baby Face asking Ellie to move into the cave with him. 0 Yes, I could have announced the winner of the “Biggest Pumpkin” contest. 10
4. Which story is older? – 20 pts  October 23, 2016 0 August 14, 1994 20
5. Words that begin with “st” – 10 pts each stood, started, storm 30 no words that begin with “st” 0
6. Is there a hero in this story? – 10 pts  Yes – Baby Face was the hero because he found Ellie in the wind storm 10 no – there is no hero in this story 0
7. Words that mean the same as “happy” – 10 pts each glad 10 no words that mean the same as “happy” 0
8. Is the weather mentioned? – 10 pts  Yes – wild autumn wind  10 no mention of weather 0
9. Mention of word “autumn” – 5 pts each wild autumn wind 5 no mention of the word “autumn”
10. Any Canadian spellings – 5 pts each no Canadian spellings 0 favourite x2 10
TOTAL SCORE: 75 50

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