Story Battle 18 – Baby Face Monster’s Windy Day vs. Travelin’ Rick Goes to the Fall Fair
Story Battle 18
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Baby Face Monster’s Windy Day
- Story 2 – Travelin’ Rick Goes to the Fall Fair
The winner of Story Battle 18 is Baby Face Monster’s Windy Day with 75 points.
STORY 1
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STORY 2
Travelin’ Rick Goes to the Fall Fair
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QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
1. Which story do I like best? – 10 pts | I don’t like this story as much. | 0 | I do like this story better because it is fun to go to the fall fair. | 10 |
2. Which character drawing do I like best? – 10 pts | I do like this character the best. I like his curl. | 10 | I don’t like this drawing as much. | 0 |
3. Could story end any better? – 10 pts. if yes | No, this one ended good with Baby Face asking Ellie to move into the cave with him. | 0 | Yes, I could have announced the winner of the “Biggest Pumpkin” contest. | 10 |
4. Which story is older? – 20 pts | October 23, 2016 | 0 | August 14, 1994 | 20 |
5. Words that begin with “st” – 10 pts each | stood, started, storm | 30 | no words that begin with “st” | 0 |
6. Is there a hero in this story? – 10 pts | Yes – Baby Face was the hero because he found Ellie in the wind storm | 10 | no – there is no hero in this story | 0 |
7. Words that mean the same as “happy” – 10 pts each | glad | 10 | no words that mean the same as “happy” | 0 |
8. Is the weather mentioned? – 10 pts | Yes – wild autumn wind | 10 | no mention of weather | 0 |
9. Mention of word “autumn” – 5 pts each | wild autumn wind | 5 | no mention of the word “autumn” | |
10. Any Canadian spellings – 5 pts each | no Canadian spellings | 0 | favourite x2 | 10 |
TOTAL SCORE: | 75 | 50 |
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