Story Battle 17 – Environment Bug’s Heat Wave vs. Pirate Pete Really is a Gentleman
Story Battle 17
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Environment Bug’s Heat Wave
- Story 2 – Pirate Pete Really is a Gentleman
The winner of Story Battle 17 is Pirate Pete Really is a Gentleman with 50 points.
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STORY 2
Pirate Pete Really is a Gentleman
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Is character evil? – 10 points | No – Environment Bug is not evil | 0 | No – even though Pirate Pete is a pirate, he is not evil | 0 |
| 2. Is character human? – 10 pts | No – Environment Bug is a fictional bug | 0 | Yes – Pirate Pete is a human character | 10 |
| 3. Does character appear in first paragraph? – 10 pts. | Yes – Environment Bug was walking the streets | 10 | Yes – Pirate Pete and Slappy, one of his crew | 10 |
| 4. Character description – 5 pts each | no character description | 0 | no character description | 0 |
| 5. Words that rhyme with fun – 10 pts each | no words that rhyme with fun | 0 | run x2 | 20 |
| 6. Does story mention bad luck – 10 pts | no mention of bad luck | 0 | no mention of bad luck | 0 |
| 7. Does the character have a heart? – 10 pts | yes – Environment Bug cares about the environment | 10 | Yes – Pirate Pete treats the women with respect | 10 |
| 8. Is the weather good? – 10 pts | no – extremely cool, damp and rainy | 0 | no mention of weather | 0 |
| 9. Words opposite of cold – 5 pts each | heat wave | 5 | no words opposite of cold | 0 |
| 10. Any Canadian spellings – 5 pts each | no Canadian spellings | 0 | no Canadian spellings | 0 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 25 | 50 | ||
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