Story Battle 17 – Environment Bug’s Heat Wave vs. Pirate Pete Really is a Gentleman

Story Battle 17

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 17 is Pirate Pete Really is a Gentleman with 50 points.
  STORY 1

Environment Bug’s Heat Wave

Environment Bug

 

 

STORY 2

Pirate Pete Really is a Gentleman

Pirate Pete

 

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Is character evil? – 10 points No – Environment Bug is not evil 0 No – even though Pirate Pete is a pirate, he is not evil 0
2. Is character human? – 10 pts  No – Environment Bug is a fictional bug 0 Yes – Pirate Pete is a human character 10
3. Does character appear in first paragraph? – 10 pts.  Yes – Environment Bug was walking the streets 10 Yes – Pirate Pete and Slappy, one of his crew 10
4. Character description – 5 pts each no character description 0 no character description 0
5. Words that rhyme with fun – 10 pts each no words that rhyme with fun 0 run x2 20
6. Does story mention bad luck – 10 pts  no mention of bad luck 0 no mention of bad luck 0
7. Does the character have a heart? – 10 pts yes – Environment Bug cares about the environment 10 Yes – Pirate Pete treats the women with respect 10
8. Is the weather good? – 10 pts  no –  extremely cool, damp and rainy  0 no mention of weather 0
9. Words opposite of cold – 5 pts each heat wave 5 no words opposite of cold 0
10. Any Canadian spellings – 5 pts each no Canadian spellings 0 no Canadian spellings 0
TOTAL SCORE: 25 50

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