Story Battle 16 – Beatrice Bee Visits Sprinkles vs. Vamp in the Sunshine

Story Battle 16

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 16 a tie. Both stories had 46 points.
  STORY 1

Beatrice Bee Visits Sprinkles

Beatrice Bee

 

 

STORY 2

Vamp in the Sunshine

Vampire

 

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Does character have a funny name? – 10 pts. for each Beatrice is not a funny name, Sprinkles is a funny name 10 Vamp is a funny name 10
2. Description of character – 1 pt for each  candy sprinkles for hair 10 no description of character 0
3. Is the character’s needs realistic? – 10 pts. for yes yes, Beatrice wanted to find out what smelled good 10 yes, Vamp wanted to know who screamed 10
4. Mention of milk? – 10 pts  no mention of “milk” 0 no mention of “milk” 0
5. Words that have “end” in them – 1 pt for each friend 1 blend 1
6. Is story part of a story challenge for 2017 – 10 pts  yes 10 no 0
7. Mention of a tool – 1 pts for each no mention of a tool 0 no mention of a tool 0
8. Mention of the word “yes” – 5 pts for each “Yes,” said Sprinkles. 5 “Yes,” said Vamp 5
9. Mention of a park- 10 pts no mention of a park 0 yes – park bench 10
10. Older story? – 10 pts  no – this story is brand new 0 yes this story is old – written in 2010 10
TOTAL SCORE: 46 46

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