Story Battle 16 – Beatrice Bee Visits Sprinkles vs. Vamp in the Sunshine
Story Battle 16
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Beatrice Bee Visits Sprinkles
- Story 2 – Vamp in the Sunshine
The winner of Story Battle 16 a tie. Both stories had 46 points.
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Does character have a funny name? – 10 pts. for each | Beatrice is not a funny name, Sprinkles is a funny name | 10 | Vamp is a funny name | 10 |
| 2. Description of character – 1 pt for each | candy sprinkles for hair | 10 | no description of character | 0 |
| 3. Is the character’s needs realistic? – 10 pts. for yes | yes, Beatrice wanted to find out what smelled good | 10 | yes, Vamp wanted to know who screamed | 10 |
| 4. Mention of milk? – 10 pts | no mention of “milk” | 0 | no mention of “milk” | 0 |
| 5. Words that have “end” in them – 1 pt for each | friend | 1 | blend | 1 |
| 6. Is story part of a story challenge for 2017 – 10 pts | yes | 10 | no | 0 |
| 7. Mention of a tool – 1 pts for each | no mention of a tool | 0 | no mention of a tool | 0 |
| 8. Mention of the word “yes” – 5 pts for each | “Yes,” said Sprinkles. | 5 | “Yes,” said Vamp | 5 |
| 9. Mention of a park- 10 pts | no mention of a park | 0 | yes – park bench | 10 |
| 10. Older story? – 10 pts | no – this story is brand new | 0 | yes this story is old – written in 2010 | 10 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 46 | 46 | ||
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