Story Battle 15 – Apple Pie vs. Wilted Summer Flower
Story Battle 15
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Apple Pie
- Story 2 – Wilted Summer Flower
The winner of Story Battle 15 is Wilted Summer Flower with 148 points.
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Female characters? – 10 pts. for each | young girl | 10 | Jayden, Mrs. Smith, Mrs. White | 30 |
| 2. Describing the character – 1 pt for each | no description of character | 0 | sweet, soft voice, miracle voice | 3 |
| 3. Number of words in story? – 10 pts. for each 100 | 661 words | 60 | 910 words | 90 |
| 4. Mention of meats? – 10 pts | no mention of meats | 0 | no mention of meats | 0 |
| 5. Words that end with “es” – 1 pt for each | Yes x2, tastes, besides, apples x6, best, likes, pies | 13 | Yes x2, makes x2, guess | 5 |
| 6. Good personality of character – 10 pts | Marcus is the Lovable Viking | 10 | Jayden feels sorry for the wilted flower | 10 |
| 7. Mention of a money – 1 pts for each | no mention of money | 0 | no mention of money | 0 |
| 8. Mention of the word “forgot” – 5 pts for each | forgot my manners | 5 | no mention of “forgot” | 0 |
| 9. Mention of a garden – 10 pts | no mention of a garden | 0 | story takes place in a garden | 10 |
| 10. Sad ending? – 10 pts | this story has a happy ending | 0 | this story has a happy ending | 0 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 98 | 148 | ||
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