Story Battle 15 – Apple Pie vs. Wilted Summer Flower

Story Battle 15

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 15 is Wilted Summer Flower with 148 points.
  STORY 1

Apple Pie

The Lovable Viking

 

STORY 2

Wilted Summer Flower

wilted summer flower

 

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Female characters? – 10 pts. for each young girl 10 Jen-Jen, Mrs. Smith, Mrs. White 30
2. Describing the character – 1 pt for each  no description of character 0 sweet, soft voice, miracle voice  3
3. Number of words in story? – 10 pts. for each 100 661 words 60 910 words 90
4. Mention of meats? – 10 pts  no mention of meats 0 no mention of meats 0
5. Words that end with “es” – 1 pt for each Yes x2, tastes, besides, apples x6, best, likes, pies 13 Yes x2, makes x2, guess 5
6. Good personality of character – 10 pts  Marcus is the Lovable Viking 10 Jen-Jen feels sorry for the wilted flower 10
7. Mention of a money – 1 pts for each no mention of money 0 no mention of money 0
8. Mention of the word “forgot” – 5 pts for each forgot my manners 5 no mention of “forgot” 0
9. Mention of a garden – 10 pts no mention of a garden 0 story takes place in a garden 10
10. Sad ending? – 10 pts  this story has a happy ending 0 this story has a happy ending 0
TOTAL SCORE: 98 148

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