Story Battle 14 – Arrow and Cutie at the Beach vs. Summer Festival
Story Battle 14
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Arrow and Cutie at the Beach
- Story 2 – Summer Festival
The winner of Story Battle 14 is Summer Festival with 41 points.
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Is the story older than 5 years? – 20 pts. | no – this story is a week old | 0 | yes, story is 16 years old | 20 |
| 2. Descriptive words – 1 pt for each | warm x3, slinked, cool | 5 | surprise | 1 |
| 3. Does the story take place indoors? – 10 pts. | yes | 10 | no | 0 |
| 4. Mention of food? – 10 pts | no mention of food | 0 | no mention of food | 0 |
| 5. Words that have “age” in them – 1 pt for each | no words that have “age” in them | 0 | marriage x3, stage x2 | 5 |
| 6. Mention of a vehicle- 10 pts | no mention of a vehicle | 0 | no mention of a vehicle | 0 |
| 7. Mention of a colour- 1 pts for each | no mention of a colour | 0 | no mention of a colour | 0 |
| 8. Mention of the word “special” – 5 pts for each | no mention of the word “special” | 0 | special day | 5 |
| 9. Mention of a hospital – 10 pts | no mention of a hospital | 0 | no mention of a hospital | 0 |
| 10. Happy ending? – 10 pts | yes – Arrow and Cutie enjoyed their time at the beach | 10 | yes – Billy and Dianne got married | 10 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 25 | 41 | ||
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