Story Battle 14 – Arrow and Cutie at the Beach vs. Summer Festival

Story Battle 14

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 14 is Summer Festival with 41 points.
  STORY 1

Arrow and Cutie at the Beach

Arrow and Cutie

STORY 2

Summer Festival

Billy Troll

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Is the story older than 5 years? – 20 pts. no – this story is a week old 0 yes, story is 16 years old 20
2. Descriptive words – 1 pt for each  warm x3, slinked, cool 5 surprise 1
3. Does the story take place indoors? – 10 pts. yes  10 no  0
4. Mention of food? – 10 pts no mention of food 0 no mention of food 0
5. Words that have “age” in them – 1 pt for each no words that have “age” in them 0 marriage x3, stage x2 5
6. Mention of a vehicle- 10 pts no mention of a vehicle 0 no mention of a vehicle 0
7. Mention of a colour- 1 pts for each no mention of a colour 0 no mention of a colour 0
8. Mention of the word “special” – 5 pts for each no mention of the word “special” 0 special day 5
9. Mention of a hospital – 10 pts no mention of a hospital 0 no mention of a hospital 0
10. Happy ending? – 10 pts  yes – Arrow and Cutie enjoyed their time at the beach 10 yes – Billy and Dianne got married 10
TOTAL SCORE: 25 41

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