Story Battle 13 – Christopher Corn has a Meltdown vs. Flavourful Fresh Veggies
Story Battle 13
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Christopher Corn has a Meltdown
- Story 2 – Flavourful Fresh Veggies
The winner of Story Battle 13 is Flavourful Fresh Veggies with 67 points.
| STORY 1
Christopher Corn has a Meltdown
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Are the characters happy? 20 pts. | Christopher Corn does not feel like himself | 0 | Yes, because they are going to have a barbecue | 20 |
| 2. Mention character’s clothing – 1 pt for each | grabbing his clothes | 1 | no mention of clothing | 0 |
| 3. Is the story set outside? – 10 pts. | no it is set in Christopher’s bedroom and then at the main house | 0 | we are going to have a barbecue | 10 |
| 4. Mention of music? – 10 pts | Christopher picked up his guitar | 10 | We just finished practice, put the instruments away | 10 |
| 5. Words that have “est” in them – 1 pt for each | yesterday, best, rest | 3 | no “est” words | 0 |
| 6. Mention of a storm – 10 pts | no mention of a storm | 0 | no mention of a storm | 0 |
| 7. Mention of food – 1 pts for each | corn, tomato, onion, cauliflower | 4 | corn, tomato, onion, cauliflower, carrot, pepper, steak spice | 7 |
| 8. Mention of the word “health” – 5 pts for each | no mention of the word “health” | 0 | mention of the word “health” | 0 |
| 9. Do the characters have jobs? – 10 pts | yes, they are musicians | 10 | yes, they are musicians | 10 |
| 10. Mention of a dwelling – 10 pts for each | ran down to the barn | 10 | main house for dinner | 10 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 38 | 67 | ||
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