Story Battle 13 – Christopher Corn has a Meltdown vs. Flavourful Fresh Veggies

Story Battle 13

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Story Battle 13 is Flavourful Fresh Veggies with 67 points.
  STORY 1

Christopher Corn has a Meltdown

Christopher Corn

 

STORY 2

Flavourful Fresh Veggies

Fresh Veggie Family

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Are the characters happy? 20 pts. Christopher Corn does not feel like himself 0 Yes, because they are going to have a barbecue 20
2. Mention character’s clothing – 1 pt for each  grabbing his clothes 1 no mention of clothing 0
3. Is the story set outside? – 10 pts. no it is set in Christopher’s bedroom and then at the main house 0 we are going to have a barbecue 10
4. Mention of music? – 10 pts Christopher picked up his guitar 10 We just finished practice, put the instruments away 10
5. Words that have “est” in them – 1 pt for each yesterday, best, rest 3 no “est” words 0
6. Mention of a storm – 10 pts no mention of a storm 0 no mention of a storm 0
7. Mention of food – 1 pts for each corn, tomato, onion, cauliflower 4 corn, tomato, onion, cauliflower, carrot, pepper, steak spice 7
8. Mention of the word “health” – 5 pts for each no mention of the word “health” 0 mention of the word “health” 0
9. Do the characters have jobs? – 10 pts yes, they are musicians 10 yes, they are musicians 10
10. Mention of a dwelling – 10 pts for each ran down to the barn 10 main house for dinner 10
TOTAL SCORE: 38 67

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