Story Battle 11 – Arrow’s Tree Climbing Adventure vs. Little Yellow Bird
Story Battle 11
Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:
- Story 1 – Arrow’s Tree Climbing Adventure
- Story 2 – Little Yellow Bird
The winner of Story Battle 11 is Little Yellow Bird with 130 points.
| STORY 1
Arrow’s Tree Climbing Adventure
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STORY 2
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| QUESTIONS | Points | Points | ||
| 1. Character’s Feelings – 10 pts each | He was enjoying, Mommy was very patient, Mommy had no patience, Arrow looked defeated | 40 | scare the little yellow bird away, with fear, he was terrified, suddenly feeling horrible , feel so ashamed, now feeling happy | 60 |
| 2. True Story – 20 pts | Yes, this is actually a true story | 10 | no this is not a true story | 0 |
| 3. Description of setting? – 10 pts for each | bright and warm sunshine, beautiful summer day | 20 | very hot summer day | 10 |
| 4. Is the story funny? – 10 pts | Yes, this story is funny because Arrow is being silly. | 10 | no this is a serious story | 10 |
| 5. Words beginning with “STR” – 1 pt for each | no “STR” words | 0 | no “STR” words | 0 |
| 6. Description of character – 10 pts for each | no description of character | 0 | beautiful little yellow bird, most beautiful creature | 20 |
| 7. Mention of the sky or the ground – 10 pts for each | He just sat on the ground, Mommy set Arrow on the ground again | 20 | no mention of sky or ground | 0 |
| 8. Mention of the word “fun” – 5 pts for each | no mention of the word “fun” | 0 | no mention of the word “fun” | 0 |
| 9. Is character afraid? – 10 pts | no | 0 | yes – Racum was afraid of Little Yellow Bird | 10 |
| 10. How many characters? – 10 pts each | Arrow and Mommy | 20 | Racum Raccoon, Little Yellow Bird | 20 |
| TOTAL SCORE: | 120 | 130 | ||
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