Story Battle 1 – Christopher Corn and the Corn Roast vs. Cactus Water

Story Battle 1

Story Battles are a fun addition to the Storyland website, just to see the different aspects of the stories I write. The two stories for this battle are:

The winner of Battle 1 is  Cactus Water with 31 points.
  STORY 1

Christopher Corn and the Corn Roast 

Christopher Corn

STORY 2

Cactus Water

Desert Kid

 QUESTIONS    Points    Points
1. Main Characters – 1 pt for each  Christopher Corn, Farmer Fred 2  Desert Kid, Father 2
2. Number of Characters – 1 pt for each  Cameron, Calvin, Mrs. Tomato, Olive and Oliver 5  no other characters  0
3. Character Description – 1 pt for each  guitar playing cob of corn 1  no character description  0
4. Setting – 10 pts for mentioning the setting  at a corn roast 10  desert 10
5. Adventure – 10 pts for being an adventure not an adventure 0  yes, Desert Kid goes into the desert 10
6. Colour – 1 pt for each no mention 0 no mention of colour 0
7. Clothing – 1 pt for each no mention 0 leather pouch 1
8. Music – 1 pt for each guitar playing cob of corn, sang a few of their songs 2 no mention of music 0
9. Weather – 1 pt for each bad storm 1 very hot in the desert, very hot summer, way too hot, in this heat, the hotter it became, hot sun 6
10. Food – 1 pt for each corn, vegetables 2 cactus water, swallowing only the juice 2
TOTAL SCORE:   23    31

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